Week Four: Monday

This class was entirely a studio space. Those of us who had work that we had improved on from the interim presentation pinned it up and received feedback. My feedback thankfully was mainly to do with details and fixing up what I already had. I was struggling a bit with one of my spreads in particular, I just couldn't get the texture right on the Oriental Bay pages. Fay suggested a few things, like making the dogs way bigger, and placing the texture beneath the boathouses instead of above to create a more oceanic scene. I was also a little bit torn because I had a spread for Goldings bar that didn't fit with the others but it was my favourite work so far. Over the weekend I was trying to make it fit with the others, but Fay suggested to make the others fit with it.

I would be interested in receiving feedback from Matt also, as much as Fay's feedback is good, it is nice to have a new pair of eyes looking at your work.

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